Monday 13 January 2014

Pre-Production: Script Annotation


<SINGING IN A ROOM TO HERSELF>
Something always brings me back to you. – She wants to be back with her boyfriend
It never takes too long.
No matter what I say or do I'll still feel you here 'til the moment I'm gone.

<GOES INTO NARRATION>
You hold me without touch.
<”TOUCH” RELATES TO BOYFRIEND, ALTHOUGH HE ISNT THERE SHE STILL LOVES HIM>
You keep me without chains. (FREEDOM – RELATES TO THE FINAL SCENE OF THE MUSIC VIDEO)
I never wanted anything so much than to drown in your love and not feel your reign.

[CHORUS:]

Set me free, leave me be. (SHE WANTS TO BE FREE/ THOUGHTS OF SUICIDE COME NOW)
I don't want to fall another moment into your gravity.
Here I am and I stand so tall, just the way I'm supposed to be. (BELIEVES DEATH WILL MAKE HER STRONGER)
But you're on to me and all over me.

You loved me 'cause I'm fragile. (SHOWS THE FRAGILITY OF THE MAIN CHARACTER)
When I thought that I was strong.
But you touch me for a little while and all my fragile strength is gone. (COULD RELATE TO THE BULLIES SINCE THEY ARE MORE DOMINANT CHARACTERS THAN SUSIE)

[CHORUS]
<CLIMAX IN THE MUSIC, THIS IS WHEN THE PIECE NEEDS TO CLIMAX>
I live here on my knees as I try to make you see that you're everything I think I need here on the ground.
But you're neither friend nor foe though I can't seem to let you go.
The one thing that I still know is that you're keeping me down. (“DOWN” – COULD POSSIBLY FALL OFF A BRIDGE)
You're keeping me down, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah
You're on to me, and all over... (MUSIC GOES QUIETER, SHE’S DEAD AT THIS POINT)
Something always brings me back to you. (BACK WITH THE BOYFRIEND)
It never takes too long.
<MUSIC FADES HAPPILY OUT SO THE VIDEO NEEDS TO FADE OUT ON A HAPPY NOTE>

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